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Forbidden Love
Contributed by
Hammer
on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 06:56:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I am sorry you had no poem
from me to you yesterday,
sometimes this silly work,
gets in the way of play.
Though things are very busy,
And its a hectic time.
Know that you are with me,
in my heart and mind.
You know, I dread the day,
when from here Im taken away,
and phone calls and cautious
meetings is the price we will pay.
But today I will think
about when we will meet.
My mind will be on
you, a vision, oh, so sweet.
Forgive me if I worry,
our love youll forsake.
Each day with you I treasure,
and a new memory I vow to make.
So, Ill take each day thats given
and hold them surely deep
knowing that our love,
within my soul will keep.
But know that I will struggle,
with emotions over you,
as my mind attempts to juggle,
two lives apart, but fused.
And every moment of every day,
that together we have shared,
will dwell for eternity
as two souls that love has paired.
And whether the wind blows us together,
or storms pull us apart,
your love forever and ever,
will rage throughout my heart.
Copyright ©
Hammer
... [
2004-11-30 18:56:44]
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by neglected1 on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:26:41 PM AEST
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aaww so very sweet, very deep as well.. i enjoyed reading your poem .. i really liked the last stanza as well.. your words flowed very nicely..
well done
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 02:13:07 PM AEST
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| superb last stanza finishes off a very heartfelt poem. well done |
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