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Can You See?
Contributed by
Sassy
on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:01:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Can you see The ocean Waves churning Can you see The sand Blow in the wind Can you see The dolphins Jump in joy
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Sassy
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2004-11-30 19:01:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Can You See?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sassy on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 07:17:42 PM AEST (User
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i like it, i should i wrote it! |
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Re: Can You See?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:53:29 PM AEST (User
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thats so cute ! i want to go to the beach now ! lol its real short but i think if you would have made it longer than maybe it would have been something dragging on ... i want to go see now ... |
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Re: Can You See?
(User Rating: 1 ) by ArmyBrat on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:45:18 PM AEST (User
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that's so cool |
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