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devoiding extraneous packaging
Contributed by
reachingzero
on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:28:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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The shortest path between two points is a straight line.
Who would have thought that concept applies to so much.
The straight line between us seems infinite.
I don't know
Who it was
That decided to end it all.
I don't know
Who it was
That caused this discrepancy
In our individual worlds
Nothing seems to have evolved
The union of minds causes tension.
I wish it didn't have to happen this way
I wish our space didn't have to be so distant.
You've forced the position upon yourself.
I'd like to think
That one day, you'll thank me.
I'd like to think
That one day, it'll be ok.
I can't promise anything.
Your decisions hint at the outcome.
You can't expect
My solidarity to hold up through all of this.
Turning me into an empty shell
Devoiding me of my presence.
"You look good", you say.
"You don't", I think.
The words never come out.
I guess that's it.
Hopefully this isn't the end.
Only time will tell.
Copyright ©
reachingzero
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2004-11-30 20:28:40]
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Re: devoiding extraneous packaging
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:33:27 PM AEST
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| you brought this poem to life with the story like tone. great write. |
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Re: devoiding extraneous packaging
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 11:26:39 PM AEST
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| who draws the line? |
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Re: devoiding extraneous packaging
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by freckle on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 11:27:12 PM AEST
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| Very good description of a relationship at a crossroads. Which way will it go? Makes you think. |
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