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Thank the driver for hitting me, please.
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 08:48:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Bright, menicing lights blur my vision
Pain consumes my entire body
Along with the anguish in my soul
I hear sirens screaming in my ears
Causing more pain
I hear men talking in muffled, incoheret voices
I feel my shredded body being lifted onto a stretcher
The medic asks me many questions but I don't answer
To busy looking at the light in the darkness
I whisper repeatedly to the woman
All I can say
"Thank the driver. Thank the driver."
I suddenly can't hear her. I hear nothing.
Then with a burst of light, I see it.
The smooth bars
The Golden Gate opens for me
The pain! It's gone.
"Welcome home."
It was him!
I shout happily,
"THANK YOU DRIVER! THE PAIN IS GONE!"
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2004-11-30 20:48:03]
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Re: Thank the driver for hitting me, please.
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 09:05:48 PM AEST
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| excellent write. when i saw your title i thought it was funny because it sounded so sarcastic, but now i see why you chose that title. i liked this concept. original. =] |
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