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Untitled
Contributed by
musicisluv7
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Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 03:40:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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I see faces
While falling into empty spaces
My heartbeat races
I hear someone crying
I sense that she's hurting
I know what she's feeling
Who could she be
needing to be set free
From life's complexities
But why is she crying?
Why is she struggling?
In a state of confusion
With no explanation
To this situation
Life's always changing
Constantly moving
Yet not progressing
Constant motion
Filled with emotion
Always rotation
But not getting anywhere
Copyright ©
musicisluv7
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2004-12-01 03:40:27]
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Re: Untitled
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 03:47:12 AM AEST
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Very good writing especially for your first write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
Keep writng u r a natural. |
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Re: Untitled
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 05:40:27 AM AEST
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This is so good especially for your first poem, i love your ryming. Keep then coming.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:50:42 AM AEST
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| Very good poem!!! |
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Re: Untitled
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by Stonedraider23 on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 06:41:14 AM AEST
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| eh they say it all keep it up |
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