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I Made The Devil Cry
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:21:10 AM in AEST
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I made the devil cry,
Right before I said goodbye,
He loved me said he couldnt live without me,
But I needed to set myself free.
I had to leave him for my own happiness,
As I dont deserve anything less,
He wanted me to stay & be miserable,
As I walked I watched his eyes well up so full.
But I knew I could never go back,
As I was unhinged & ready to crack,
He used to hold into me so very tight,
Squeeze me to death, fill me with fright.
He said if I went he would kill himself,
That even the dark lord has damaged mental health,
But his guilt trips wouldnt make me stay,
So I turned my back & walked away.
I hear him calling to me in my sleep,
He begs me to come back, says hell forever weep,
But I now am in love with another,
Have found myself a very worthy lover.
No longer am I made to live in fear,
Every time my lover comes near,
His hands are warm & loving,
Not made for pushing or shoving.
My soul is now my own, my very own,
Into my mind unhappiness is no longer sewn,
I am the one who made the devil cry,
That was when I bid him my goodbye.
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pixie
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Re: I Made The Devil Cry
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by givingin on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:34:44 AM AEST
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great poem pixie!
I like this poem.
See, now you've shown others as well as myself, that you can escape from the darkness, and evil.
It's in yourelf to set you free.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: I Made The Devil Cry
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:44:55 AM AEST
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| another great write..This was a very cool read.. |
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Re: I Made The Devil Cry
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:59:37 AM AEST
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| An excellent write as always pix. |
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Re: I Made The Devil Cry
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 09:03:04 AM AEST
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| Awesome poem. I loved it very much!!! |
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Re: I Made The Devil Cry
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:04:37 AM AEST
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Krissie,
This shows great strength..
It gives me hope for myself..
As always you write with such talent....
Take care hun
*hugs*
Gen xx |
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Re: I Made The Devil Cry
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:16:41 AM AEST
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Really neat poem, Pixie. I really like the way it reads; but even more, I love the message of worthyness, love and hope.
Super write
Willofree |
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Re: I Made The Devil Cry
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:19:34 AM AEST
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| a really great message delivered in an unusual manner. at first i didnt like it but upon a second read i now recognise it as a very uplifting and well put piece. congratulations. |
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Re: I Made The Devil Cry
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 02:04:10 PM AEST
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| see i am really happy to read a differ write from you |
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Re: I Made The Devil Cry
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by musicisluv7 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:30:24 AM AEST
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| very deep write, gr8 use of words. emotion rily evident, wondaful as usual. |
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Re: I Made The Devil Cry
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by MMISS on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 01:12:57 PM AEST
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you are so talented!. love your writes
love how she moved on and found another. |
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