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I Broke You
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:53:15 AM in AEST
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I was the one who broke you,
Snapped your soul clean in two,
I was sick of your childish taunts,
Fed up with having a mind that you haunt.
You never thought I would snap,
Id just had enough of all your crap,
In my head I could see your sneering face,
That was something I just had to erase.
I bided my time I waited & waited,
For a prime opportunity my breath was baited,
But when it came I was ready to pounce,
Kick the ***** out of you, every last ounce.
You looked so pitiful crying like a new born babe,
Asking me to spare your life your soul to save,
I laughed & danced around your lifeless form,
Over the years with your torment youd caused a storm.
I held nothing back, mercy you didnt deserve,
Now your ugly corpse I really want to preserve,
I want to keep it as a token that I won,
As breaking you was so much fun.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-12-01 11:53:15]
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Re: I Broke You
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:57:20 AM AEST
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Wow pixie dear that was very power and dark.lol
awsome write .keep them coming. :)
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Re: I Broke You
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 12:38:53 PM AEST
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| woe... wow.. You told him off. and how wow. great poem. masterpiece. |
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Re: I Broke You
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 02:02:13 PM AEST
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| wow a great write and an even better move |
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Re: I Broke You
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by Dawny on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 02:48:39 PM AEST
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Wow Pixie, very powerful and dark, excellent poem as always
Love Dawny xxx |
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Re: I Broke You
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:57:19 PM AEST
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| you want to preserve an ugly corpse..my God....Aww..you funny girl..hugs..taker care :-) venkat |
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Re: I Broke You
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:16:37 PM AEST
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Oh yeah !!! Vengence, retaliatory retribution, triumphant survivor tales !!! Kick some bass, Pixie. Grab your pole, were goin fishin. Stoppin by the taxidermist later and gettin that SOB stuffed and mounted. Lets see how he likes that !!! Whoooooo Hoooooo !!!
Great write pixie .... sorry ... I, I, Uh don't know what came over me !!!
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: I Broke You
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by secretwind on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 10:35:51 PM AEST
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The pain and the pleasure
of thee attack
hmm
so sweeet.
The Wind |
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