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Kiss of Death
Contributed by
savedbydeath
on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 04:00:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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with lips so smooth
and shiny
we kissed in a phone booth
the kiss was deadly
it was raining
we were trying to keep warm
looking into your eyes i could see everything
he kept me save from the storm
it was the kiss of death
i dropped to the ground
blood everywhere,but i could still see my breath
with it raining,the bllod was flowing down
he stood over my emotionless
body,he wasnt even restless
it seemed like he wasnt satisfied
like he needed to kill me even more,but i just died
i died laying there on the cold ashplault
but it wasnt his fault
my meaningless body just layed there
to rest for all eturnity,with people around to stair
no one cares
everyone just stairs
i hear everything
i see everything
he walked by
with a big smile
it was raining
looking into his eye and saw nothing
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2004-12-01 16:00:03]
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Re: Kiss of Death
(User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 04:46:31 PM AEST
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I liked the images and atmosphere.
Shows you are not doing the same thing
all the time.
Cool.
--Mothy |
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Re: Kiss of Death
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by Stonedraider23 on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 07:26:44 PM AEST
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| Spooky i gotted chills sum what dont spook me like that good write tho |
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Re: Kiss of Death
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by Lips on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 09:12:09 PM AEST
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| I like the darkness of your writing; i enjoyed that you kept taking us back to the rain. |
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