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I'm Dying
Contributed by
cocacola1331
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Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 04:25:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I'm dying and nobody seems to notice
They're all blind to my true pains,
My true miseries
They don't see that I'm suffocating,
Drowning and wasting away...
I'm slipping away, can't you see?
I thought it was so obvious...
Why won't you stop the pain before it's
Too late?
It's killing me.
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cocacola1331
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2004-12-01 16:25:42]
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Re: I'm Dying
(User Rating: 1 )
by LilGnefkow on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 04:53:47 PM AEST
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| wow, this poem is really good. I can tell that you're going through a really tough time...I am too. I know how hard it is |
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Re: I'm Dying
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by EternalNight4x on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 06:37:09 PM AEST
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| well expressed, short and to the point...I know how it feels to be unnoticed and how people don't seem to realize how deep your sinking deeper into depression..well excellent job keep on postng |
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