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As I die
Contributed by
Dragontear27
on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 05:43:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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As I die I open my eyes
and look up at the old blue sky
I watch as the clouds float away
I never thought i'd see this day
the wind blows gently across my face
getting my body ready for the other place
the warm feeling inside my chest
is leading me to the path of eternal rest
my body feels free, and so painless
is this the beggining of true happiness
sunshine creeps arcross my eyes
I shut them slowly as my body dies
when they shut a field of flowers incase the land
dying is nothing like I had planned
I always thought it was darkness and sin
but this peaceful world is the new life I begin
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2004-12-01 17:43:33]
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Re: As I die
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by kisser89 on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 06:00:53 PM AEST
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| great, luv how it all flows together, keep it : ) |
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Re: As I die
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by x_midnight_x on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 06:44:27 PM AEST
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i cant believe this poem has been read so many times with only 1 comment?
geeez this is what we need and are hungry for!
i love it...as i close my eyes and my body dies...
we are energy made of love and light,
never ceasing existance and eternally bright.
blessings to you and yours,
midnight x
(i hope theres loads to come...very inspirational...theres too much gloom and doom already...
life is exciting and so is the beyond :) |
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Re: As I die
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by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:15:54 PM AEST
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I hope to have that Peace passing over too
Beautifully written |
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