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My life is now obsolete
Contributed by
WestCPunk
on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 07:10:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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heartbreaking moments
nonstop tears
shattered ear drums
broken dreams
vanished voice
suicidal tendencies
bloody knives
****** up fights
sleepless nights
black and blue bruises
slapped in the face
told i'm the ultimate mistake
i'm not greedy
im on the edge of misery
i'm not snazzy
im a ****** piece history
my mind is drastically sore
my rage is going to end in an uproar
there's nothing left to score
and i'm scarred for life
deep down
all the way to the core
just because what i say is true
you think you know me
well at least you think you do
im not okay
i've lost my way
once again my vision has to turned to gray
and my comprehension has been delayed
don't try to understand me
i'm no longer disreet
just push delete
because as of this moment
my life is now obsolete!
Copyright ©
WestCPunk
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2004-12-01 19:10:25]
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Re: My life is now obsolete
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 09:58:30 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. it doesnt have to rhyme to be great poetry. =] |
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Re: My life is now obsolete
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by Chanti on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:33:33 PM AEST
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Beautiful write... i loved it.
-Chanti |
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