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My Tears
Contributed by
shattered_heart
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Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:09:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My tears are of pain,
But no one knows how violent.
I don't want to overwhelm,
So I make crying silent.
My tears fall so fast,
That no one can hear them splatter.
Only the cement can feel them,
So why would it matter.
My tears are the last dewdrops,
From a once lifely flower.
The blossom is crushed,
It's your love that's gone sour.
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shattered_heart
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2004-12-01 20:09:10]
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Re: My Tears
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by CaddishCut on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:34:36 PM AEST
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| I relate 100%. Beautiful write |
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Re: My Tears
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:53:19 PM AEST
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| this is so sad |
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Re: My Tears
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:57:07 PM AEST
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| i loved this. emotional write written with power and written well at that. |
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Re: My Tears
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by Dragontear27 on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 09:14:43 PM AEST
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| OMG I KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN! It sucks don't it oh i've been there to lol like the other person that commented i relate like 1,000,000,000%. But since i know how it feels im really sorry i know it can hurt more than anything you ever feel in your life. If you need to talk dont hesitate to talk to somone. If you wanna talk to me feel free. |
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Re: My Tears
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by pixie on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 05:22:34 AM AEST
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awww this is so moving, memories of your love will fade in tinme, but it's just the getting there that will hurt, *hugs* written with such raw emotion, I still remember this feeling well,
pixie xx |
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