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The Queen Annes Revenge
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:59:27 AM in AEST
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Ever ever we see the shore,
A land of beauty, a land of yore.
The islands of the east.
Forgotten lands held in this grip,
Of sea and sky and ship.
The gulls o'rehead play to the whistle,
A dance on the eddies and breeze.
Oh, to be home under a bustle, or corset,
Finding a woman to please.
But the map points out, a course for a curse.
Home seems to far, to far.
In the rythm of bouncing waves,
A lull dulls the crew to it's sleep.
The sails go slack, and rigging falls loose.
The Devil stole our wind and brought a noose.
Cold and pail, they froze to the deck,
All the while they never knew, they never knew.
I was the mutiny on board,
A foul fellow for it's sorts.
I was the noose and a fine one at that.
My brothers now rest on port.
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Re: The Queen Annes Revenge
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 01:02:43 AM AEST
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Beautiful and very inspirational, thanks for sharing :o)
Take Care
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Re: The Queen Annes Revenge
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 01:47:51 AM AEST
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You darned non-conformist you !!! I have some Alka-Seltzer for those gulls ( Haaa !!! ).
A fabulous write, Dano. A good mutiny always makes for a terrific tale. I loved the imagery and the mix of rhyme that kept it unpredictable.
Nazzy ~
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Re: The Queen Annes Revenge
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 02:22:39 PM AEST
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| Wow Dane this write is awsome. |
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Re: The Queen Annes Revenge
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 05:36:28 PM AEST
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It still has your soul, brother.
I have no fear you will ever
paint yourself into a stylistic box.
--Mothy |
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Re: The Queen Annes Revenge
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by theDeathRaven on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 01:17:10 AM AEST
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| wow! |
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Re: The Queen Annes Revenge
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 05:06:19 PM AEST
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haHA!!! Dane this effing ruled! and...was that rhyming *gasps* I loved how it didn't all rhyme though...amazing
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Re: The Queen Annes Revenge
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 12:10:36 AM AEST
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was thinking it was going to be queens annes lace, lol,
was pleasantly surprized and delighted, excellent
write, may you ever have ink:)
hugs n' love nessa
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