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Can you let me go?
Contributed by
butterbuns
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 08:11:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If I was to go away
leave today and never some back
would you be able to understand
or would you force me to explain?
You picked the latter, so I guess I must
I just wanted to get away
being here is making me crazy
the nights are shorter, the days longer
when I'm with you
Let me go
I'm begging you
I want to be free
I want to fly
I only stayed so not to hurt you
that was the last thing on my mind
leaving now would free us both
so I shall, your words won't delay me
I'll be gone by morning light
my face an image in a dream
don't look for me I won't be found
there is nothing left for me
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butterbuns
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2004-12-02 08:11:22]
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Re: Can you let me go?
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by pixie on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 08:12:54 AM AEST
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a very sad and emotional write, well composed,
pixie xx |
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Re: Can you let me go?
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by givingin on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 08:26:17 AM AEST
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hmm, I see,
good write. |
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Re: Can you let me go?
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by alexb on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 09:26:01 AM AEST
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i see how you feel, though i am on the other side, great write
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Re: Can you let me go?
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by givingin on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 04:01:00 PM AEST
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Hmmm . . . .Leave today and never SOME back, eh?
Ya, ok, sure . . . whatever you say.
The day's are longer and the nights are shorter. . . .WELL WHAT DO YOU EXPECT! IT'S BLOODY CANADA.
Oh my lordly lord.
. . .. Riiigghgghghttt . . . . |
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