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Strokes
Contributed by
atreyuskye
on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 10:14:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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the brush touches purity
colors form lines
the distorted image is becoming clear
the brush is dipped in red
smooth long strokes
i finally see the face
hair as red as fire
eyes the color of dark chocolate
eyelashes long and shining
eyes full of warmth
she stares at me
brush dipped in caramel
her skin looks as smooth as velvet
skin colorbrings out her eyes
the edges of her mouth come up
a smile forms
my distorted view has come to life
i sit back and look at her
i wish she were real
the perfect vision
an untainted beauty
goddess of my dreams
the woman of my dreams sitting in front of me
on a wall of purity
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atreyuskye
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2004-12-02 10:14:28]
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Re: Strokes
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by pixie on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 10:15:18 AM AEST
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that was lovely,
pixie xx |
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Re: Strokes
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by atreyuskye on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:22:38 PM AEST
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| thank you pixie |
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