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Old Man Winter
Contributed by
Baronhawk
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 10:18:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Grey you are,
as winter is to my spring,
this gulf of years,
that does separate us as beings
Yet among our peers,
you are the youngest it seems,
in thoughts, acts and vision,
you are most energetic I deem.
You are a paradox I glance,
old in age wise in experience,
yet young at heart,
and always fresh in idioms.
As a father you are,
to us all the saplings,
giving good guidance,
gracious words and gentle chidings.
With all your counted winnings
this is perhaps your most,
you are a man enriched,
by giving your heart is embossed.
As I trod upon my path,
I bid farewell, adieu,
I wish you all the best,
my one and buddy true.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2004-12-02 10:18:00]
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Re: Old Man Winter
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by Baronhawk on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 10:20:19 AM AEST
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Opps forgot abou the " mark again. text does'nt show up after that sign.
The full text up top is:
Another poem about the old friends I wrote about in ' A Journey To Oz'. This one is about Papa Ghaus, my good buddy for a while. |
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Re: Old Man Winter
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 10:31:41 AM AEST
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liked this poem... is was a good read...
awaiting ur next
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~ |
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Re: Old Man Winter
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by arden on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 08:49:59 AM AEST
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this was a nice poem.
very thoughtful things to save about your friend.
good wording and expression.
lovely poem.
well done
Arden |
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Re: Old Man Winter
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by freckle on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 08:18:26 PM AEST
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| Great poem, I would be honored if I were your friend. Enjoyed it! |
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Re: Old Man Winter
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 09:42:28 AM AEST
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I had to come here...... having been introduced to Papa Ghaus just now via your photo album.
The warmth and respect embedded in this piece does not surprise me. There is something in Papa's face that tells me that he is a wonderful being... and you, of course, are one yourself. This tribute then - is exactly as I anticipated it would be... quite touching and beautifully real.
Thank you, friend... for sharing and for introducing us to an extraordinary soul.
Be well,
~Snem~ |
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