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Peaking
Contributed by
aden6942
on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 02:11:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Forced to wild desires Driven to crazy things Tamed are few and far Incedible lust it brings
Leaving for greener grass Traveling to finer pastures The running bpm of life Slows not for bad disasters
Taking every punch Turning every cheek Won't stop me loving Getting to this peak
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Re: Peaking
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:48:59 PM AEST (User
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excellent write. written well. excellent rhythym. |
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