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HOW COULD YOU
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 02:51:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Why the hell did you do this to me?
Why couldnt you just leave me be?
Was my business yours to intrude?
Once again youve worsened my mood
I hate you for what you will do
If what I have heard from others is true
Just **** off and leave me be
Cant you see what youve done to me
What was meant to help made things worse
Youve casted upon me a lingering curse
My sinful secret to you I confined
But to tell other you did not mind
My life will never be the same
And I have you to blame
Copyright ©
EternalNight4x
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2004-12-02 14:51:42]
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Re: HOW COULD YOU
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by Renstar on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:30:05 PM AEST
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| aww, dont u just hate it when people break your trust...great write keep it up |
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Re: HOW COULD YOU
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 07:35:37 PM AEST
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amazing and brilliant write. full of power, anger, and emotion. written well. excellent rhymes.
"Trust Can Kill You Or Set You Free
Both Are A Prison To Thee
Nothing Matters Except The Prison That We Seek
To Me, Nothing Is The Prison That I Keep
As I Lie Down To Sleep, I Realize
The Thing That Keeps Me Is A Feeling" |
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