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I SMOKE SO WHAT
Contributed by
lemmen
on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:07:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Yeah I smoke so what,
You don't like it, Oh well.
It's not your body go
to hell.
I smoke more than just
cigarettes I smoke pot
as well.
What's it to you it's not
destroying you?
Ohh no second hand smoke
a deadly thing only if I'm close
enough to you.
Or live with you,
Will it maybe kill you.
You ban me from smoking
at public events.
You ban me from smoking
in buildings.
Stupid ****.
Now, You want to ban me from
smoking in bars as well.
Well, You can go straight to
HELL.
It's my free given right to
destroy my body as I like.
A little smoke may hurt your
eyes OH NO!!
But it won't kill you right
away's as far as I know.
So keep itching you little
******.
Wining and crying.
About my smoking.
Getting my high on.
You're not my keeper.
I don't know you from ****.
Tell me I can't smoke,
I'll blow it in your face.
Give me a break you
******* *******.
I know about all the
hazard today.
Just leave me alone the
world would be a better
place.
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
lemmen
... [
2004-12-02 15:07:20]
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Re: I SMOKE SO WHAT
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by pixie on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:09:00 PM AEST
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a very angry write, we all have to have some pleasures in life, drinking is mine and I smoke when I drink so.... lol
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: I SMOKE SO WHAT
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by Renstar on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:19:11 PM AEST
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| i bet u r from Oz? soon we wont be able to smoke in our own homes it really is crazy that they are trying to ban smoking from pubs, and they say cos of the health of the workers there...well hello?? who would get into a job where it is well known that there is going to be people smoking around you if you dont like it, change jobs! people have been enjoying a beer and a smoke for years probably the grandparents of the people who are complaining...lol why change it now? hear u loud and clear..good poem:) |
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Re: I SMOKE SO WHAT
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by Jenn2004 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 03:40:30 PM AEST
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| good poem, i dont smoke, but i smoke weed. |
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Re: I SMOKE SO WHAT
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 07:27:56 PM AEST
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| well im against smoking, and thats all i will say about that....but you wrote this full of anger and power. very nice. |
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Re: I SMOKE SO WHAT
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 08:03:55 PM AEST
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i smoke weed and cigarrettes so i know this feeling...and i hate when people tell me i should smoke that its destroying my body....but thats just it its my body so its not anyones business......great write.....i loved it.....good job expressing yourself and the way alot of others im sure feel....superb
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: I SMOKE SO WHAT
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 09:43:15 AM AEST
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Very well written.. Anger and raw emotions.. I don't smoke so you might call me a good girl but I really liked this write
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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