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Drown
Contributed by
wakegurl77
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:35:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Something doesn't feel right here
sitting here all alone on this pier
please come save me
or let me drown
i'll drown in the sorrow
that is all around
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2004-12-02 16:35:01]
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Re: Drown
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by pixie on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:35:31 PM AEST
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powerful short and very sad, written well
pixie xx |
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Re: Drown
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:34:36 PM AEST
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| good write. i could get you floaties? =] |
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Re: Drown
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by boobiepeach on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 09:15:26 PM AEST
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| deep, short and sweet |
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Re: Drown
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 03:30:37 PM AEST
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| Very short, but gets to the point. Good one! |
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