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New Beginning
Contributed by
daydreamer22
on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 09:07:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Sitting alone in the darkness
Staring up at the starry midnight sky
Thinking of things that could have been
Remembering you...
I try to forget the painful end
It is always right there in the back of my mind
Holding on to the memory of you...
Forever it will be there
I sit waiting for the sunrise
To signal a new beggining
A new day, with all its possibilities
No matter how hard I try
The memory of you will always haunt me
But instead of letting it control my life
I will make new memories
That can block out the pain
The pain you caused me
When you walked away
Can't be forgotten
Only pushed aside
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2004-12-02 21:07:26]
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Re: New Beginning
(User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 09:31:53 PM AEST
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Despite what you think this is rather good. It is a well-expressed poem about the feelings of moving on, and is done with truth and frankness. I think this is a particularly nice line: I sit waiting for the sunrise
To signal a new beggining
A new day, with all its possibilities
I think it expresses a bit of hope. May that hope drive you onward. |
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