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Marie
Contributed by
sian
on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:50:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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At just twenty three
where were we?
All smiles in class
how quick the smile does pass.
You use to make us laugh
now we walk down the path
behind your coffin, so light
you tried with all your might.
We missed the tell tale signs
the cuts behind the blinds
the weight you quickly lost
a young life it cost
Fair hair and caring eyes
how were we to know this was our last goodbyes?
Why didnt you say?
We could have helped you stay!
He hurt you deep
that is why you now sleep
away from hurt and pain
allowed to be free again
Grow your wings and fly high
look down upon us from the sky
We will remember you....
Copyright ©
sian
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2004-12-03 04:50:57]
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Re: Marie
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by musicisluv7 on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 05:25:02 AM AEST
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very well written poem. its sad how we never realise b4 its 2 late, im sorry.dnt blame urself.
much luv |
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Re: Marie
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by skraggs on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:45:17 AM AEST
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| that is for reals dude.. that is felt.... i know about loss as well... i feel ya |
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Re: Marie
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 10:03:27 PM AEST
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| Heartbreaking write. |
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