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This Feeling
Contributed by
bruised_hands08
on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:38:26 AM in AEST
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I want out, I hate this life
I want out, I hate this place
But all I can think about
Is her and her smile
And then I want back into
This life and this place
She makes it all better
She makes me feel good
She makes me feel wanted
Not hated like I have for so long
I am scared for my feelings sometimes
I havent felt like this for a long time
I like it
Its comforting
It is soothing
I love this feeling
If it dies I will die
I will hate this life
This place
This feeling is calming
She makes me alive
She feeds it
When I hold her
When I kiss he
When I talk to her
This feeling is great
It burns in me like an eternal flame
And when she is not there I am cold
This fire is almost out
I need fuel for this fire
I need her.
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Re: This Feeling
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by skraggs on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:43:08 AM AEST
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