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Still Bubbles Burst
Contributed by
MMISS
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Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 09:12:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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as your bubbles float in air
i watch with joy
as my bubbles float in air
you burst in selfishness
if you could allow
let one of mine survive
not one has ever
that You can't deny
not one burst for you
in joy i watch for you
in greed you watch for me
to take from me my joy
on days my wish were real
watch mine go up there
float up high
no more my wish fulfilled
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MMISS
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2004-12-03 09:12:41]
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Re: Still Bubbles Burst
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by arden on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 09:21:09 AM AEST
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on days my wish were real
watch mine go up there
float up high
no more my wish fulfilled
great poem. a bit sad. very insightful and deep. well written.
lovely. i enjoyed it. 5 stars
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Re: Still Bubbles Burst
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by pixie on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 10:06:55 AM AEST
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bubbles are so lovely, this poem is amazingly written. with so much feeling,
piixe xx |
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Re: Still Bubbles Burst
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by FlawlessMistake on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 05:24:02 PM AEST
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| I liked this poem alot. great write, and thanks for the comment! |
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