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Blue Brown Eyes
Contributed by
MMISS
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Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 09:51:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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ive got blue
in these brown eyes again
i'm even shedding blue tears
thats what its done to me
ever since you left me
thats how i feel everyday
ever since you've been gone
i look in the mirror and all i see
is blue- in these brown eyes of mine
if you'd only just come home
and make my blue eyes- brown again
come back baby and paint my world
its all blue and oh i sure miss you
i can't stand another day
of these blue- brown eyes
i got blue- in these brown eyes again
remember when
we were more than friends
i miss those times- and then
the hurtin starts all over
and i get blue in these brown eyes
again
you're the only one
that can turn my blue eyes- brown
you know, you know how
can't wait another day
til you come back home
and paint my world
and make my blue eyes -brown again
i wasn't born with these blue eyes
they changed when you left me
i want my brown eyes back
cause blue's- too cruel
please come back
and make my blue eyes brown again
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MMISS
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Re: Blue Brown Eyes
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by pixie on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 09:58:47 AM AEST
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awww that was so sad *hugs* i hope that one day your eyees will go back to brown and stay that way forever, I really liked this poem, it was very well composed,
pixie xx |
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Re: Blue Brown Eyes
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by Overstated on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 12:53:13 PM AEST
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| wow that was the piece of writing i have read by you - the ideas of the poem are brillant |
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Re: Blue Brown Eyes
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by Pepper on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 03:11:01 PM AEST
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| This poem reminds me of the song Crystal Gail sung.Keep up the great work! |
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Re: Blue Brown Eyes
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 03:19:04 PM AEST
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Sadly beautiful..
Jenni |
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Re: Blue Brown Eyes
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by LittleMANof04 on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 05:50:23 PM AEST
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| hey, thanks for noting me. great poem. awesome reference to how the eyes/life is blue. kinda looked and seemed worded like a song. |
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