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if only you felt the same way...
Contributed by
In2thetwilightzone
on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 10:01:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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" mixed up emotion,
words caught in my heart,
stuck in the throat
right from the start,
right from the moment i saw you,
and you looked in my eye,
the world was another dimension,
it was just you and i,
now my aura radiates lust,
it gives off a need,
a need to be toutched,
a need to stem the bleed,
i curse and cry and moan at the confusion,
i see a new beginning,
a peaceful illusion,
but i know you dont feel the same,
i know your nothing more than my inspiration,
if only you felt the same,
we could take everything one step at a time,
i could pull you close,
and feel your virgin body next to mine,
i could put a dent in your halo,
if you'd ever let me lead the way,
id lay you down and show you that this love thing could be okay,
maybe we could be together,
baby it could be you and me,
but i dont think you'd understand,
as you dont really know me,
we only met a while ago,
and your more interested in my foe,
if only i could hold you close,
so soon enough you'd know...
if only we could fall into the the void,
i dont understand this new feeling,
if only you felt the same way.....
jazz
jazz13697@hotmail.com "
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2004-12-03 10:01:59]
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Re: if only you felt the same way...
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 10:34:24 AM AEST
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great write... maybe one day he will c that u love him... and he will feel tha same way... and u two will be together... there is always hope... great write...
hope to c more from u soon
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~ |
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Re: if only you felt the same way...
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by n2dep2care on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 03:53:42 PM AEST
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Very,very nice write. Sounds like a song! Keep it up!
Laurie |
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