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An Angel
Contributed by
lovingkk05
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Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 01:01:52 PM in AEST
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She was only 17,
And she wore her heart where everyone could see.
Touching everyone's life in her own special way,
Showing she cared with every word she would say.
Walking with radiance and a glow,
But none of us were prepared to let her go,
Now that she is gone the world seems so empty,
No one could ever replace the person she used to be.
The memories of her will forever last,
She will alwyas be with us and never be the past.
We will never let the image of her smile fade,
We promise her that today.
But for now we must all say good-bye,
To the girl we all loved so much deep inside.
Copyright ©
lovingkk05
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2004-12-03 13:01:52]
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Re: An Angel
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by pixie on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 01:03:45 PM AEST
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a very sad and moving write *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: An Angel
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by MMISS on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 01:05:16 PM AEST
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| very touching and sweet. sorry you had to lose her. good writing |
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Re: An Angel
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by arden on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 01:14:30 PM AEST
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i agree, it is a sad write.
a very touching dedication, very heartfelt.
beautifully done.
5 stars
Arden |
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Re: An Angel
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by aringb on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:54:01 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem dedicated to someone you cared for. |
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Re: An Angel
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by chocolate_girl on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 04:12:41 PM AEST
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omg i wish i has written that. but it would have said 'she was only 16'
i can relate to this so much, a friend of mine died earlier this year. she was and still is an angel. i totally love this poem, thanks xxx |
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