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They Want the Help (They Just Don't Know It)
Contributed by
CaddishCut
on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 03:25:58 PM in AEST
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Lifeless hearts
Seamless scars
Torturing dreams
Silent screams
Who you are
And who you want me to be
Are one in the same
That's how they made me
Lifeless hearts
Seamless scars
Torturing dreams
Silent screams
What I am
Is a replicated shadow of you
A face with no name
That's how they made you too
Trapped in your life
Please let me free
The question is
Why do you want to be me
Floating memories
A time when I was me
Look at yourself
And your family
Lifeless hearts
Seamless scars
Torturing dreams
Silent screams
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CaddishCut
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2004-12-03 15:25:58]
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Re: They Want the Help (They Just Don't Know It)
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by FlawlessMistake on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 05:32:29 PM AEST
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| Wow. Good poem, i espscially like the title! And thanks for the comment on my poem!! |
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Re: They Want the Help (They Just Don't Know It)
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by buchi on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:18:44 PM AEST
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| Life hurts...its living that gives us a break...great write.... |
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