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REVISIT
Contributed by
lemmen
on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:03:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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To revisit the past, A going home of sorts. Walking the streets of your youth. Visiting places you haven't seen in years. Looking up old friends. Seeing how everything has change.
But you are still the same. Remembering all the things you wanted to gain.
Visiting your x wife and seeing her life is worst than yours. Isn't great. She got five kid's and no husband. OH WELL. Get out of life what you put in. I guess she reaping her reward of her past sins.
MY HEART CRIES FOR HER NOT.
But it's great to be back home again. Looking up old friends. Seeing how your past has change.
Who's in jail. Who's on parole. Who made it in their life. Who's in the grave.
It's been what let's see It's been ten It's been ten years since I've been here.
Faces have change. Places have change.
It's no longer my past It's a different place. But it is still my home, It's the only place I don't feel alone.
HOLLAND, MICHIGAN.
Is the only home I ever had? It may have change but it will always be apart of me.
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
lemmen
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2004-12-03 16:03:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: REVISIT
(User Rating: 1 ) by MMISS on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:49:57 PM AEST (User
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a little serious. a little funny . i like it alot. great write |
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Re: REVISIT
(User Rating: 1 ) by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 06:06:58 PM AEST (User
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The reason i love to read things such as this,
is the feeling i get from reading it.
So much emotion, i can really feel the pain.
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Re: REVISIT
(User Rating: 1 ) by mysticaldancer on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 11:12:27 AM AEST (User
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all sorts of emotions in this poem...very well written...kind of reminds me of how someone would feel at a high school reunion...lol...enjoyed it very much |
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