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Illusion
Contributed by
GothicHollie
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Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:31:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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All illusions to help us by
Illusions set to please the mind
Are they Real?
Just as real as our mind decides to make them
Pain, Misery, Hate
Not a day goes by without them
But if we didnt have them
Would we survive?
I want to hold myself just once more
Just to see if i can still feel
If there is anythign left in my body
To show that i'm still alive
I've become numb
Not wanting to free myself from the lies that i've created
My mind has becomed so used to them
To say otherwise would destroy me
So what else is left to do?
But to crawl with the rest
Like Zombies
Comforming to this pathetic Illusion, Avoiding Reality...
Copyright ©
GothicHollie
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2004-12-03 16:31:07]
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Re: Illusion
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by MMISS on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:43:43 PM AEST
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| causes you to think deep. good work |
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Re: Illusion
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:16:14 PM AEST
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| Good write...It's interesting |
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Re: Illusion
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 05:01:50 PM AEST
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| a terrific poem, really makes you think. |
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