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Would You Give Me Something New To Write?....
Contributed by
justjonesy
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Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 06:57:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This morning I found the words
and all the things I would say
but i crumpled them into a ball
and threw them all away
They read: 'The summer left you behind
but that summer saw things
....a perfect silhouette
hidden behind blue wings.'
Why do I have to tell these tales of loss
with a hope ever so slight?
my pen is running out of ink
Would you give me something new to write?
Copyright ©
justjonesy
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2004-12-03 18:57:11]
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Re: Would You Give Me Something New To Write?....
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by Summerwine on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 11:42:01 PM AEST
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| Honestly...I read it and i didn't get what you were saying |
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Re: Would You Give Me Something New To Write?....
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by justjonesy on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 12:26:06 AM AEST
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| well I was trying to write about how I am tired about writing of lost love and all the hope for the future stuff. It's supposed to be asking someone to be that person who will get me to write about something else ie. maybe love found...I dunno...it was about 5 am when I wrote it...they all can't be good i guess hey.....oh well |
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Re: Would You Give Me Something New To Write?....
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:40:25 AM AEST
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good rhyme pattern well done.
johnny. |
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Re: Would You Give Me Something New To Write?....
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 04:02:47 AM AEST
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| Clever write. I liked it! :-) |
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