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I Love You Too
Contributed by
hugs_and_kisses_cutie
on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:42:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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What is this pain
That melts me inside
Takes all that I have
Makes me want to die
Im right at the edge
Im standing on the slippery ledge
They try and tell me Im sane
But Im slipping from the striking rain
I can see the ground now
Oh no! Ive tripped
Do I want to let go do I want to loose grip?
I love you I scream I just thought you should know
He stops with fear his expression is lost
What has she done!
He turns to the police man, shivers run down his spine
I took her life he says and now Ill take mine
As he walks to the ledge tears roll down his cheeks
His heart begins racing his body feels so weak
They try and stop him, but theres nothing they can do
He dives of the ledge and screams I love you too.
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2004-12-03 19:42:35]
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Re: I Love You Too
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by justjonesy on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 08:35:51 PM AEST
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| another great concept....I love it when I hear something new....I hope to see some more in the future |
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