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dont forget my name
Contributed by
cinderella88
on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 11:53:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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take a look at your life
is it what you planned?
isnt it hard to live
in a castle made of sand?
reaching out for dreams
dancing in thin air
holding onto memories
that are no longer even there
let go of all you used to know
say hello to a new life
try and be strong, just turn away
please dont pick up that knife
everything has changed
but i remain the same
please dont slip away
please dont forget my name
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cinderella88
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2004-12-03 23:53:20]
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Re: dont forget my name
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 12:12:32 AM AEST
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| excellent write. creative first stanza. fantastic message. |
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Re: dont forget my name
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 04:10:54 AM AEST
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Ohh this is really good, i love the first stanza it stands out from the rest.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: dont forget my name
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by pyro_88 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 12:29:26 PM AEST
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| great write. i really loved it. keep em coming. |
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