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teardrops in her coffee
Contributed by
MMISS
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Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:18:37 AM in AEST
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teardrops in her coffee
she walked outside to get the mail and then poured coffee from the pot she just made and as she sat down at the table she noticed a letter addressed to jane
they were drippin in her coffee cup as she read that dear jane letter no matter how hard she tried she couldn't continue til she felt better
she just had to keep on despite how she was feelin it took everything she had to wipe her eyes and go on readin
the coffee cup ran over as she filled it up with tears remembering every i love you what did it mean all those years
the tears she shed seemed useless as she cried her heart into droppin teardrops in her coffee cup was all she seem to do
well she finished that old letter and broke down in tears and pain it was too much for her to handle that letter addressed to jane
yes she cries teardrops in her coffee cup every now and then and if any body knows it i sure do because my name is jane
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Re: teardrops in her coffee
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:20:47 AM AEST (User
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wow you have really excelled yourself with this, it was amazing, truly amazing,
pixie xx |
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Re: teardrops in her coffee
(User Rating: 1 ) by vallie_val on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:26:13 AM AEST (User
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wow awesome!!and i like this combination "teardrops in her coffee"..i dunno why but i do |
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Re: teardrops in her coffee
(User Rating: 1 ) by smilez101 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:24:57 AM AEST (User
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that was a really good poem |
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Re: teardrops in her coffee
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kitty_cat on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:53:45 AM AEST (User
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wow, this is a really amazing poem. I love the title and the last stanza, its very powerful I reckon.
cat xxx |
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Re: teardrops in her coffee
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 12:33:53 PM AEST (User
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Loved the title....wonderful write..
Jenni |
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Re: teardrops in her coffee
(User Rating: 1 ) by antfarmer on
Monday, 24th October 2011 @ 07:12:48 AM AEST (User
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keep writing, good job |
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