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Slipping...
Contributed by
Kitty_cat
on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:23:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Gone 3 months
Without you here
May not seem that long
But its felt like years
I can feel an ache inside
My heart is broken tore
I still have your things laying around
Your CD's, the shirts you wore
I remember the talks we had by the fire
We used to stay up all night
I remember the times we lay on the sofa
Where Id hold and cuddle you tight
I look around my apartment
Everything reminds of you
I try to get on with my everyday life
But your hovering over it too
I cant get away from this pain
I cannot hide from its grip
Everytime I think Ive escaped
I can feel myself start to slip...
Copyright ©
Kitty_cat
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2004-12-04 09:23:29]
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Re: Slipping...
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by pixie on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:30:29 AM AEST
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a very sad write, hope that time becomes a great healer for you
piixe xx |
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Re: Slipping...
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by HellsLibrarian on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:45:31 AM AEST
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| I can feel your pain through this, but I think the format of the poem is holding you back. |
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Re: Slipping...
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by Evilnn on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:36:25 AM AEST
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Kitty I'm so sorry for your loss
You sound so sad. I feel for you.
Please hang in there and I hope all goes well for you soon.
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