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NO ONE
Contributed by
Evilnn
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Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:40:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tell them to be quiet
Tell them to shut up
They're making me go crazy
They're telling me to cut
Time is a land mine
That blows you into space
Space is a circle without any edges
That leaves you dangling amongst it's ledges
Like a fossill
NO ONE knows what lurks inside
Hacking the brain into pieces
Tha pain and horror begin it's releases
Slice it open
Come forth pain and sin
Over and over, again and again
The only way to know you're alive is with pain
NO ONE is pain to know you're alive
NO ONE is dead and so she must die
Copyright ©
Evilnn
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2004-12-04 10:40:37]
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Re: NO ONE
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by Kitty_cat on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:49:46 AM AEST
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woah, this is really good. I really like this poem...i can't put my finger on why I like it though. A very emotional write. I can only imagine a fraction of the torment your going through. If you ever need to talk, know that i'm here.
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Re: NO ONE
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by N0body on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 01:52:09 PM AEST
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No one.....i like it.
~Nobody |
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Re: NO ONE
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by EternalNight4x on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 04:14:04 PM AEST
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| very emotional and well expressed write...I agree the only way to know you're alive is with pain...well keep up the great writes |
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