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Bleed the Pain
Contributed by
CreaterofChaos
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Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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She cuts herself, Just to see
How it feels, Just to bleed
So much pain, In her heart
How did this all, Even start,
Why is there, No joy in her life?
Instead of all, This ***** strife
The life has left, Her saddened eyes
All she wants, To do is die.
Then she does it, All over again
Hoping eventually, To bring the end
It was all a simple, Cry for attention
But no one ever, Even mentioned
The scars that, So clearly showed
Or how her eyes, Lost their glow
No one ever, cared to share
Or ever take, The time to care
So in the end, What was the cost?
Her life was so, Carelessly lost!
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2002-11-25 07:30:00]
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Re: Bleed the Pain
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by OreO on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 09:14:07 AM AEST
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The part in this poem where it says that no one ever cared to share or ever take the time to care is so true in so many ways with alot of self mutilators. I think many people fear the unknown, i think that many people don't know what to say to a self mutilator, and they certainly don't know what to say to help. it's sad really because there's not much anyone really has to say except "i care". Thanks for sharing this one it hit home with me real hard and took me back in time.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Bleed the Pain
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by CreaterofChaos on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 05:55:34 PM AEST
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| Thank you very much i have never shared my poetry with anyone and that is very helpful i was really scared that no one would like it. Thanks a lot. |
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Re: Bleed the Pain
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 03:30:26 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem. So sad. I can relate a lot... wow don't know what to say.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Bleed the Pain
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by xraz0rx on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 06:53:39 PM AEST
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what a great poem..keep up your writing, your really talented.
*missy* |
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Re: Bleed the Pain
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by scottishdancer on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 05:13:14 PM AEST
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| This is a really good poem. I can relate my high school years to this poem. I really like this poem, it's very emotional. I think you should continue to write more of them. |
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Re: Bleed the Pain
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by SAT on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 04:14:04 PM AEST
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| this poem is unbelievable! i love it, but only because i can relate to that person... ive gotten help though... so take the time to write more of these poems, they're really good, and they make people listen to the cries. |
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