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Living A Lie
Contributed by
BabyFacedAngel2010
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Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 07:26:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Living a lie is what my life consit of.
Im happy now:Later *!****...but i'll tell you im ok.
I cant find happyness:Idont understand this life.
I'm living a lie.
You say you care:You say you love me...
But is it me whos living the lie or are you following through.?
I wake up everyday:Nightmears sourund me!...
I need help:Ineed gudence.
Im living a lie...
You think you know me,so dont I but really deep down
in side im just living a lie.
It keeps growing!
STOP i wanna shout but it keep on and on...
Then I see a light...its beuatful...Away out..??
Acually its just the light telling me to keep on:so i prossed...
Then I fall...and fall... STOP i finally shout but no one is there,
There gone:when I've finally found my way out...
What do I do...I try to find them and end up back...
Living A Lie!.....
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2004-12-04 19:26:22]
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Re: Living A Lie
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 07:38:36 PM AEST
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Hmmm....Definitly not bad, but not as great as it could be...take more time to type it, and you will get your point across much more clear...I did like it though
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