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the truth is killing me
Contributed by
Chanti
on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:27:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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you tore a hole
into helpless hearts
i tried to understand
but i cant set apart
all that you have done
though i have tried
to look at you
through forgiving eyes
she makes it so hard
i keep trying to believe
its not your fault
but you lied to me
through it all
you justified your lies
with such grace
that not a single tear
ran down my face
it didnt make sense
but you went on
about a life
where i dont belong
i hope you are as happy
as i try to portray
the most synthetic of smiles
every wednesday.
Copyright ©
Chanti
... [
2004-12-04 22:27:41]
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Re: the truth is killing me
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:32:36 PM AEST
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| excellent write. written well and full of power. |
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Re: the truth is killing me
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:33:40 PM AEST
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Very good poem. The lines...
"though i have tried
to look at you
through forgiving eyes
she makes it so hard"
...reached me well. |
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Re: the truth is killing me
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:37:27 PM AEST
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| Cool poem awesome and visual, showing strength, and written in emotion and feeling, beaitufl poem...keep on writing |
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Re: the truth is killing me
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:37:07 PM AEST
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good poem indeed I enjoyed it. I don't know
who your talking about... maybe a counselor?
But I suggest you don't meet this person
again on Wednesday. Once again a great
poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
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