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The Fickle Heart
Contributed by
LittleMANof04
on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:42:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I just cant believe
That Ive done it again
Letting my heart
Play games with my head
My fickle heart
Cannot choose one
And then be done
My mind is tricked
Thinking shell be fun
But not three days later
Im talking with
Someone else
And finding her
To be a grade A girl.
So if I
Happen to say
That I cant
Live on without you.
Dont listen to me
Thatd be my fickle heart.
Copyright ©
LittleMANof04
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2004-12-04 23:42:48]
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Re: The Fickle Heart
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:45:51 PM AEST
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| well having a fickle heart is okay as only as you have a sound mind =] |
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Re: The Fickle Heart
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 12:10:04 AM AEST
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A remarkably awesome write.
Luv the humor.
Great work.
luv, huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: The Fickle Heart
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 12:15:57 AM AEST
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Well I know what ya feel like sometimes.
Check out my poem "Corraled." Sorta similar thinking.
Nice write!
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Re: The Fickle Heart
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by evilcherry312 on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 03:57:55 PM AEST
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| Glad to see a new one from you. This is definately a great poem; very well written. The ending makes me sad, though... |
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Re: The Fickle Heart
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by Stitch on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 09:02:53 AM AEST
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If some men wore this warning on their foreheads, we'd all be better off.
Stitch |
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