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What is your love?
Contributed by
girish
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Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 01:55:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Should legs walk the way our eyes look?
Should our mind go the way the legs walk?
Should the person take the way one`s mind takes?
Should we forget the path noble persons took?
The power of your eye-sight went along with the dreams
The words you had spoken went along with the breeze
But the truth of our love, the city knows, will live for you
And to those who don`t understand, it will slew
Should our mind go the way the legs walk?
For false-hood people like you, it’s a new culture
Some follow this culture, since they don`t beware
For those living earnestly, which is the culture?
They follow the culture, laid out by our ancestors
Should we forget the path noble persons took?
What is the use of those minds that don`t amend?
Why should they be born, if they don`t get concerned?
Whether you be alive or die, your name be spelled
Who else can live this way, your name be proclaimed
Should legs walk the way our eyes look?
Should our mind go the way the legs walk?
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Re: What is your love?
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 02:02:04 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: What is your love?
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:10:22 AM AEST
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great write...
hope to c more from u soon
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Re: What is your love?
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 06:17:59 AM AEST
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I have seen love walk away
I have felt the terrible pain
I can really relate to this poem
Forgive me lord for I am human I am weak
The mind says no
I follow my feet
Nice poem great meaning
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Re: What is your love?
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by sek-c-shaun on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 02:05:21 PM AEST
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| great poem......it really makes you think |
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Re: What is your love?
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:20:23 PM AEST
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| great write.. coinsumes you in thought... thank you for your comments on my writting |
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