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Wine Dark Moods
Contributed by
bohemian_with_a_pen
on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 02:21:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This depression is smothering me
Crushing my soul like autumn leaves
Capturing me on the border of illusion and reality
I carefully tread the thin line between sanity and lunacy
The latter turning my moods wine dark
And tearing apart all reasoning
Insomnia has taken ahold
Forcing me to sleep in cobweb strands
and praying for some sort of redemption
Until I have no choice but to let go
and finally fade to black
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2004-12-05 02:21:17]
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Re: Wine Dark Moods
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by in2thetwilightzone2 on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 02:28:38 AM AEST
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oooh, dark, powerfull, remnded me of a black cloud cascading down on to earth with the mighty force of hell,
destroying everything, even destroying us... |
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Re: Wine Dark Moods
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 02:58:37 AM AEST
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Know what that's like.
I discovered writing in 1979. Had to empty my over active brain somehow.
Once my brain is satisfied then I sleep.Sometimess it's hours then other times days/
Awesome masterpeice 2 us the other insomniacs.
lub, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Wine Dark Moods
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 04:31:54 AM AEST
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This is awesome, i love the feeling of this. Such a dark write and written so well.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Wine Dark Moods
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by pixie on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 07:32:03 AM AEST
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very good, structured well, very sad and emotional, and depressive,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Wine Dark Moods
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 07:42:18 PM AEST
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Forcing me to sleep in cobweb strands
and praying for some sort of redemption
I thought this was strong and heavy - wonderful job depicting the smothering so well.
Thanks for sharing |
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Re: Wine Dark Moods
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 10:21:05 AM AEST
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Woah, I love this.
Powerful and dark.
Great write, you used great descriptions.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Wine Dark Moods
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by _myonlyone_ on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 12:31:19 AM AEST
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| wow... that's all I can really say. Amazing descriptions. keep up the great work... |
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