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I let him win, am I really that weak!?!
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:43:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Darkness floods through me
You cannot win
I won't let you win
Crystal tears push at my eyes
Begging to be freed
I won't let you win
If I cry...
No; I will not let it happen
I won't let you win
Screams bear down against my throat
I can't hold it back any longer
I can't believe I did it
I let him get to me
How could I give in?
How could I not
His laughter courses through me
Like a deadly disease in my veins
I break down and run.
Away from that classroom
Away from the laughter, and embarassment
All I can think
I hate him with everything that I am
He won.
I'll never forgive him.
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Re: I let him win, am I really that weak!?!
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by MMISS on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 12:05:05 PM AEST
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| betrayal is a visious thing. never know who you can trust, huh? you sure have a wonderful way with word. great writting. keep it coming. |
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Re: I let him win, am I really that weak!?!
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by pixie on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 12:08:57 PM AEST
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your raw anger has amde for a great write, best way to get them out is in writing, sometimes I find it hard to control my temper lol, great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: I let him win, am I really that weak!?!
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 04:45:42 PM AEST
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| revenge can be sweet and bitter... |
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