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one last time
Contributed by
co_cane13
on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 01:19:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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i close my eyes on last time
and go to hell for my crimes
rotting flesh hangs from walls
they bleed in pain, as blood it falls
it drips upon weary souls
and dries upon the burning coal
my eyes tear in thoughtless pain
and mind, it fights to stay sane
my temples begin to tighten
as my soul, it grows frightened
the fire rages and burns my soul
as i fall through an endless hole
i scream in agony as i am falling
as i hear the Devil's demons calling
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Re: one last time
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by Flicker on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 09:57:04 PM AEST
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| ......that was so sad.it was like i could feel the pain your in.it was kinda like i was watching you suffer and i wanted to stop you.but hey anyways it was a great poem....very deep but also very good.please dont say that was your last poem |
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