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Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 03:48:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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My heart has walked this road before
And never again, I swore
That it would travel this path again
Because then it'd never be broken to mend
But there you stand, looking in
And here I am, back where I've been
It's not like you're reaching with a relationship
But you are making my stable world tip
I prayed to God about you and this
If He gave me an answer... it was a miss
I've never before been this confused
And I'm sure He's up there... amused...
And I know this isn't a silly crush
Because my heart doesn't have that stupid rush
But I desire to know you more...
...what am I sharing this for?
If all I got was one wish fulfilled
I'd ask for one day with you to build
A friendship as our next endeavor
So that I could stand and hug you forever
Jaime Moran
December 5th, 2004
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Re: MORE....
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by Angelic_Demon on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 04:10:58 PM AEST
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| *Grins* I like it. It's really good. |
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 06:16:29 PM AEST
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great write... really good... i enjoyed reading it...
hope to c more from u soon
~!*!~jishes~!*!~ |
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 01:48:28 AM AEST
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sooo sweet!!!! love it:) huggles n' loves ya, nessamum xxx...
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Re: MORE....
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:30:05 AM AEST
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Awwwww this is just adorably sweet darlin' Very nicely written, as always, and is simply beautiful. :o)
Hugs 'n Love
S'meee
- Becca |
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