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°°°Start Without Me°°°
Contributed by
OreO
on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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When tomorrow starts without me
If the sun should rise and find your eyes
All filled with tears for me
I wish so much you wouldn't cry
Just know i'm finally free
You'll think of all the many things
We didn't get to say or do
Don't live with regret in this lifetime
Just know how much i love you
Please try to understand
That the wind has called my name
It took me by the hand
Nobody is to blame
It took me way up high
In heaven far above
And said i'd have to leave behind
All those i dearly love
But as i turn to walk away
Tears fall from my blue eyes
For all my life, I'd always thought
I didnt' want to die
When you have your paper and pen
And your feeling all alone
Go to our special place
Where your heart can freely roam
I had so much to live for
So much yet to do
I thought of all the yesterdays
And things to do with you
I asked you not very long ago
To share your life with me
I just want you to know
In your dreams is where i'll be
So when tomorrow starts without me
Don't think were far apart
For every time you think of me
I'm right there in your heart
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-11-25 17:00:00]
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Re: °°°Start Without Me°°°
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by Baby_Blu-XTC on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 06:03:29 PM AEST
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I really really enjoyed readin this OreO.
U are such a great writer.plz keep them comin. |
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Re: °°°Start Without Me°°°
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by darkeyedman on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 06:14:28 PM AEST
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| so many good lines! good write. jim |
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Re: °°°Start Without Me°°°
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by juliette on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 07:23:52 PM AEST
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That line - "When tomorrow starts without me" makes this whole awesome poem. I really like it. You made me cry.......
Thanks for sharing!
Juliette |
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Re: °°°Start Without Me°°°
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by spaceotter on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 04:40:22 AM AEST
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| Oreo, good poem. I've been there before, and I know how it is. Maybe not the problem that caused it, but definetly the end thoughts. Great write. |
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Re: °°°Start Without Me°°°
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by LivingDeath on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 03:52:46 AM AEST
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i crossed with this poem a little ago...
i stood spechless for like ten minutes...
then i read it again , and now it was an hour...
nice work...
as allways...
best wishes, more to say:
another master piece.
LIVING DEATH |
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Re: °°°Start Without Me°°°
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by Panther_1978 on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 02:50:14 AM AEST
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OreO, great write! I teared up... Keep it up
Panther |
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Re: °°°Start Without Me°°°
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by Panther_1978 on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 03:15:29 AM AEST
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I dont know what to say about this one... life is never gonna start without you! Good write
Panther |
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Re: °°°Start Without Me°°°
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by chantel on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 12:31:21 AM AEST
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oreo,
you will never believe this but my friend read this poem at his girlfrinds funeral and i knew he got it off the net i just didn't know where now i now i know you are sooooooooo talented
chantel |
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