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places vs inside
Contributed by
surge_joebot
on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:27:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A place beyond that line.
A line we draw in time.
The boundaries in our mind.
Crossed and left far behind.
Inside I'm broken,
Dying... I'm crying.
Soul is bleeding,
It's twisting... Needing.
Brain is straining,
Screaming... it's frightening.
The times I've cried,
I felt useless...
Ashamed, so lifeless.
Left behind me own demolished life.
Left out the only thing that was right.
What if we both go too far this time.
Die together, and we are gone.
Walk right next to you til the end.
Deep inside I'm burning.
Black... dead, dying.
Take this pain,
Release... make ease.
I'm breaking down,
Falling... pieces shattered.
All is pointless,
Everyday the same old *****.
Don't wake up,
Don't move on...
Die here breaking inside.
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2004-12-05 23:27:59]
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Re: places vs inside
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by MMISS on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:30:50 PM AEST
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