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Suicide
Contributed by
happybunnyfan
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Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:25:55 AM in AEST
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she thinks everyone hates her
feels nothings going right
now her father raped her
and her mother says its alright
yeah we all got problems
but not enough to die
she doesn't seem to feel
that way so she choses suicide
your to desperate to make descisions
to lost to take control
if you could only be yourself
you just might save your soul
she went to the doctor
and he gave her some pills
she doesn't like to take them
but they help her with her ills
she still has the cut marks
from the time she tried before
"why won't it cut" she said "just a little bit more"
chours x2
everytime she lays down in her bed
the fight begens once more
and she wishes she was dead
nothing seems to make it stop
not even those pills
so she decides to stop taking them
and face her ills
choursx2
she can't tell her teachers
and it hurts to tell her friends
so she hides her feels
and continues her days
but when she gets home her dad shuts the door
then throws her on the bed
and the fight begans once more
choursx3
outro
yeah we all got problems
but not enough to die
she doen't seem to feel that way
so she choses suicide
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2004-12-06 00:25:55]
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Re: Suicide
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:43:49 AM AEST
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| I like the lyrics, although I think that you repeat the Chorus too many times, but it really depends on what tune the lyrics are sung to and how fast the song is supposed to go. other than that I thought that it was very good. |
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Re: Suicide
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by surge_joebot on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:46:30 AM AEST
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| OMG, i have shivers, im crying - sooo sad but so brilliant |
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Re: Suicide
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 02:38:44 AM AEST
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Very sad, touching, heart breaking write.
luv, huggs,
emy
It's written so well. |
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Re: Suicide
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:32:32 AM AEST
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| Very powerful and sad write. |
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Re: Suicide
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by Stonedraider23 on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 03:50:49 AM AEST
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| great they all said it all im not a song writer type but sounded good not my type tho |
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