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The great flight
Contributed by
theDeathRaven
on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 02:32:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Cuando el sol muere,
(When the sun dies,)
Cuando el rio deja de fluir,
(and the river stops its flow,)
y tu corazn dej de latir,
(and your heart stops its beats,)
El dolor muri para t
(The pain died for you)
Cual herica victoria contra la entropa,
(Like an heroic victory against the entropy,)
asi tu vida transcurri,
( thus your life passed,)
deseando en lo profundo de tu alma,
(wishing in the deepest of your soul,)
la muerte del dolor y la agona
( the death of pain and agony,)
Si pudiramos ser aves y volar a lo ms alto,
(If we could be birds and fly higher,)
de esta batalla perdida escapariamos,
(of this lost battle we would scape, )
Deseando por solo un momento,
(Wishing only for a while, )
libertad del temor y la afliccin
(freedom of the fear and affliction,)
Viajeros exhaustos en la infinita travesa por el tiempo,
( Exhausted travellers in the infinite passage across the time)
Cansados de las palabras de profetas y visionarios,
(Tired of the words of prophets and visionaries)
Soamos con las estrellas y algn da tocarlas
( We dreamed about stars and someday touch them)
As es amiga ma como t emprendiste el vuelo,
( thus it is my friend, as you undertook your flight)
Cual gaviota que se pierde en la inmensidad del ocano,
( As gull that loses itself in the immensity of the ocean)
Tu volaste hacia las estrellas
(You flew towards stars)
Y no dudo de que algn da yo haga lo mismo
( And I do not doubt that i will do the same someday)
Copyright ©
theDeathRaven
... [
2004-12-06 02:32:54]
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Re: The great flight
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 02:43:00 AM AEST
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An awesome masterpeice and dedication.
So moving.
luv, huggs, strength,
emy |
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Re: The great flight
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by BethB88 on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 02:44:17 AM AEST
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| i'm learning spanish and i adore the language and i adore this poem! the spanish language is beautiful and your poem lives up to its beauty. i love the imagery. wow, i'm stunned :) |
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Re: The great flight
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by Kie on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 05:42:16 AM AEST
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This is a heartwarming dedication to a friend.
It is beautiful and touches deeply inside.
Kie |
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