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Borrowed Gifts
Contributed by
Lord_Justice
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Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:47:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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I recieve all the pain but can't dish nothing out left out in the rain but when its sunny then I'm never out can't do anything without any power can't survive the storm I'm surprised to see another hour from the day I was born I only lived on borrowed time a mentality that isn't mine and writing out borrowed ryhmes this life of mine should have been extinguished, can't distinguish if this is really me borrowed spanish, borrowed english but you can't really see borrowed feelings, borrowed trouble anything negative you see it in me, make it double anything negative I see it in you, tone it down bring up the positives what goes around comes around of that I'm positve so untill I can't use theese hands I'll make a solem wish even though I'm a man I'll make a wish that goes like this: please grant me knowledge with a lot of power some cash for college let it stop raining for just a few hours and let me meet my family can I just have it all without everyone mad at me will wishing be my downfall? TBC
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Re: Borrowed Gifts
(User Rating: 1 ) by sicknivesevered on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:33:00 AM AEST (User
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Nifty flow. Everything was strung together quite well. Nice work! (^_^)b |
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Re: Borrowed Gifts
(User Rating: 1 ) by brew on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 08:59:36 AM AEST (User
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Touching, and deep write....feelings flowed evenly. Keep posting.
Brew~ |
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Re: Borrowed Gifts
(User Rating: 1 ) by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 01:47:33 PM AEST (User
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You write well..nice wishes too.. |
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